Saturday

A Poem

I loved writing since I was a very little. Specially poems and short stories.
I recently found a big blue book of all sorts of interesting stuff written by me when I was 8, including poems, stories and even a short play. Here's a sample of my writing:



Transcript:


I wrote this poem bymyself (yeah! no plagiarism) on 14-1-91. Aditi tandon 8 years. III A


Mister Sun
Good Morning Mr. Sun. How did you wake so soon?
You drove away the stars and darkness and the moon. (i LOVED to rhyme!)
You go to sleep when it becomes night
And I know what you're doing is quite right (the know-it-all Aditi)
In the morning you wake up the sleepy heads, to brush thier (ya, that's how I spelt it) teeth and comb thier hair
But first get up from thier beds
Now I say Good bye Mr. Sun, next time we'll have some more fun. (Definitely. I'm sure Mr. Sun had fun listening to an 8 year old narrate his daily schedule to him)

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4 Comments:

Blogger $am said...

hey...someday v will hear about that poem of urs being featured in an anu malik song...(with him singing it of course)...cool wallet, i used to have a donald duck one but lost it on the school sports day...it had 40 bucks in it...was in the 5th std....felt so damn guilty na after that!...v used to never take our wallet to school neway, and the day i took it to show it off, i lost it!...Murphy's law yet again...

8:07 AM  
Blogger $am said...

oh and its fee-do...not fhy-do...im guessing no one had the balls to correct mallika...

8:10 AM  
Blogger thegoodduck said...

its the sweetest poem i have read in a long time..

9:37 AM  
Blogger $am said...

yup...wot u say is rite...admitting that u r frm a backward class actually does feel weird...mainly because it insults the accomplishment and the efforts taken by my father and his father to bring us to a level where v have everything v can ask for...it is difficult to understand and even more difficult to explain...it is sad that even after so many years, instead of correcting the terrible mistakes that have been made, ppl like arjun singh and others want to continue doing it...and why?...just for vote banks...

btw, didya watch the arjun singh interview by karan thapar?...managed to catch the last 10 mins wen our very own himesh mehra messaged, but got the transcript of the interview by e-mail...thapar kicks ass...

PS : himesh never sings english lyrics, so for the time being, v will have to do with anu malik...(except if u consider the latest himesh song where he says 'i love u sayyonee...koi shaq?...wats up?')

12:18 PM  

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